I have a new story called, The Blue stone Girl. Here is just the first paragraph of what is about to come next!
The start of the Journey Chapter 1There was a village in the deep, dark
woods called Motfer. It was a small
village on the banks of the river Ronday.
All of the adults in the village were mean people as soon as the sun
set. You may wonder why they would start
becoming mean. It was because of the
gemstone that was supposedly hidden in the mountains. The legends described it as a tiny, oval
shaped, blue stone which radiated purple light.
It resided in the cave on the Saeker Mountains. The kids had a secret cave where they hid
until morning. One night, an adventurous
girl named Martine decided to find the jewel and break it. She decided to start out in the morning so
she could get as far as possible into the woods before night fell. All she took was: a candle, twelve matches, and
a piece of cheese, some rope, and a knife.
She set out into the woods, having no idea about the dangers she was
about to face.
:) - a piece of cheese?
ReplyDeleteWell, anyways, I think it's a great chapter! I like how you described everything. I, also write many stories on my computer!
- Ria (RiRi B.)
Dont ask about the cheese. Its yummy! Whats your favorite story that you have written? Dont bother replying here. Just email me.
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ReplyDeleteBTW - I LOVE CHEESE!